Graphic Design 2.1: Professional Practice, Project 10: Tutor Feedback and Reflection

E1: You have presented all of this work very well. You have identified your strengths and weaknesses well.

R1: Your analysis of pros and cons is very informative.

Overall this is an interesting read and you have made some relevant points and used appropriate references. It’s a bit hard to read the PDF as a long document as it doesn’t want to scroll with ease. It would be easier to access as separate pages and then you could use columns. You could also add some sub-headings so that we can navigate through the text a bit more easily. You could focus a bit more on the conclusion and expand on this further.

• Thanks for the feedback, I will edit the format and add subheadings etc. I was very wary of the word count as I am at the 1400 max but I could make edits/shorten other parts of the review.

Your Process Book shows a rigorous design process for each assignment. The interspersing of bold pages within the design helps to add a change of pace to the narrative. One thing to watch out for is the density of some of the body copy. Sometimes it appears overly dark and dominant and there are also some long line lengths where 2 columns might work better.